poor boys and the Fanshaws

white smoke and a hanging coffin
                       figure

somewhat inert

this is the, or a, beginning to something 
for the boys to do 
                             they are mimicking machines 
              to overcome male fear    (   )      male     
the enveloping wholeness 
seemingly aggressive     
                womb

of renewal by dancing

                                 "are you allright mate?" 

was their chorus

                  remaking                  young men